兔子q 发表于 2018-1-3 16:17:36

雅思写作范文:儿童保育中心

一些双职工父母认为儿童保育中心可以给他们的孩子们提供最好的呵护,然后另外一些人认为其他家庭成员比如祖父母可以做这项工作。讨论下这两个观点,然后给出自己的观点。

Task:Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, while others think of other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  Sample answer:

  Traditionally, toddlers are raised by their relatives such as grandparents in most countries. However, daycare centers have gained a growing popularity among working parents in recent years. From my point of view, attending a childcare center has more benefits.**** Hidden Message *****

  I personally believe that no child can become an active and valuable member of any society without intercommunicating with other peers. Therefore, although there are conniving arguments for a relative care, it is better to send them into daycare centers in the childhood period.

caidongdong 发表于 2019-4-11 23:54:51

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